We looked at a youtube clip and chose words or sentences that we liked then used them to write our own paragraph.
The hunt is on with her smooth and glossy scales.
The Inland Taipan stays fluid and silent.
She relies on relatively strong eye sight to hone in her target.
Moving in for the kill with her slender body
realising that if this was to be devastatingly
accurate there would be little to chance.
Slithering along silently she strikes repeatedly.
Meanly munching up her prey. It’s the venom that makes her
the world's deadliest snake.
The Inland Taipan stays fluid and silent.
She relies on relatively strong eye sight to hone in her target.
Moving in for the kill with her slender body
realising that if this was to be devastatingly
accurate there would be little to chance.
Slithering along silently she strikes repeatedly.
Meanly munching up her prey. It’s the venom that makes her
the world's deadliest snake.
Hi We are from Rimu Learning Hub at Ormond. Your writing is really cool, we liked how you showed not tell.Maybe a picture in the background.Can't wait to read more of your writing.
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