kia ora Ropiha,My name is Aylee.I am from Mangapapa school in Gisborne I really like how you Have lots of detail and you are really good at writing. Next time I think you could use less color. My favourite part was the part when you mentioned how much houses and churches got burnt.by Aylee
Hi Ropiha, I'm Quinn from Mangapapa school in Gisborne. I love your poster and the colours you used. I use your title font for basically everything. I never knew about that fire but, I now know how it started and everything it did to London. I really want to go to London someday and walk to Buckingham palace. If you want to look at my blog: https://quinnhslearning.blogspot.com/
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kia ora Ropiha,My name is Aylee.I am from Mangapapa school in Gisborne I really like how you Have lots of detail and you are really good at writing.
ReplyDeleteNext time I think you could use less color. My favourite part was the part when you mentioned how much houses and churches got burnt.by Aylee
Hi Ropiha,my name is Hosannna and i'm from mangapapa school in Gizzy.I love
ReplyDeleteHow interesting your story is.You should add more writing though.
Hi Ropiha, I'm Quinn from Mangapapa school in Gisborne. I love your poster and the colours you used. I use your title font for basically everything. I never knew about that fire but, I now know how it started and everything it did to London. I really want to go to London someday and walk to Buckingham palace. If you want to look at my blog: https://quinnhslearning.blogspot.com/
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